I am experiencing
a you specific
lonliness. It is a need
for things left
undone. You are
all hands and toungue
and voice in motion.
You are comfort, desire;
you are contentment
You are my need.
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I love this.
“a need for things left undone.” that’s a great line.
You really do a great job of expressing longing here.
Such clear need. The “you” need. You make the simple, so clear.
Did they come home? Cause I’d have.
i love this too. what a perfect last line.
Oh frig, this is so palpable, so quietly urgent…your needs are your needs, I hope you never extinguish them…
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