Gifts

Lets just give
eachother pictures of the things
we would like to buy
for Christmas this year.

I wil cut out for you
that Tiffany necklace
you’ve started to pretend
not to want, peel off
the sticker

of the magazine you like
from a circular ad. This is
the only way I can give you
back what I have taken.

So, will you accept a cut out
of a paradise vacation
if I’ve cut it out without
fraying the edges?
Can it be the same as lying
with me on a sandy beach?

4 Comments

Filed under Frustrations and Rants, Musings, poetry

4 responses to “Gifts

  1. This is great slynne.

    Not to criticise but to me
    it feels a tad unfinished,
    like it should go on.

  2. This is beautiful.
    I’ll have to link it.

  3. I agreet that is comes across as unfinished. It needs a little work.

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