Ellen’s Question

Does she know that
what it all means,

the consequences of actions.
I think so, I think she does,

now. I think she knows
such sugar coated luck

cannot take another pass
thru the mouth without dissolving.

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One response to “Ellen’s Question

  1. Fantastic. The ending is biting and perfectly crafted.

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