I am experiencing
a you specific
lonliness. It is a need
for things left
undone. You are
all hands and toungue
and voice in motion.
You are comfort, desire;
you are contentment
and passion.
You are my need.
Come home.
February 15, 2009...9:27 pm
a specific lonliness
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February 16, 2009 at 5:04 am
I love this.
February 17, 2009 at 11:55 am
“a need for things left undone.” that’s a great line.
February 25, 2009 at 9:49 am
You really do a great job of expressing longing here.
February 28, 2009 at 1:45 am
Such clear need. The “you” need. You make the simple, so clear.
March 5, 2009 at 3:41 am
Did they come home? Cause I’d have.
March 6, 2009 at 2:01 am
i love this too. what a perfect last line.
May 1, 2009 at 10:20 am
Oh frig, this is so palpable, so quietly urgent…your needs are your needs, I hope you never extinguish them…
Poet Man